January 31st, 2005
|hollow_hills||02:05 pm - Triangle|
"Oh my God, I've missed you!"
"Jake, it's only been three weeks. You've been sleeping on a tour bus next to me for the past year, and you will be for the next several months." Despite his seemingly harsh words, Babydaddy smiled inwardly.
"I know," said Jake, snuggling up to the bear. "But I hate not being by your side."
Now BD smiled outwardly as well. "I know; I've hated it too," he murmured. Jake, whose eyes had been closed the moment his head hit Babydaddy's fuzzy chest and his arms had wrapped around that perfect waist, smiled and made a noise akin to purring.
"My God, you fags never stop with the stroking and the cuddling and the hugging. You'd think you two were lovers!"
Jake grinned. "Hey Ana!" he said, and jumped up to give a hug as well. "How was your break?"
"It was alright, and I'm ready to get back on the road. Thousands of fans are waiting."
Babydaddy snorted. "Thousands? This is a U.S. branch of the tour, remember."
Ana came over and ruffled Babydaddy's hair, which was by now maybe half an inch thick. "Well, the total will amount to thousands. Thousands of gays, trannies and general weirdos who all share one thing in common: Great taste in music!"
"And who will all be chanting, 'Let's see your ass!' at me," Jake smiled wryly.
"Well, they have great taste in asses, too, yours is such a great pert little bubble butt," Babydaddy said, slapping Jake on the bum. "Oh my God, you've been working out!"
"Yeah," Jake replied. "No more, 'Is he tweaked, starved or exhausted?' wonderings."
Ana smiled and draped her arms around her two fellow band members' waists. "It's so good to be home."
Screams erupted as the first guitar chords to Scissor Sisters' cover of "Comfrotably Numb" rang out into the bar. With the pink lights shining on the stage and into the audience, the smoke from a hundred and fifty cigarettes only added to the atmosphere.
Jake's voice rang out across the venue. "Hello, hello, hello? Is there anybody out there?" Singing over a crescendo of screams, he and Ana continued, grinning. "Just nod if you can hear me."
As the show went on, the crowd got only more energetic and involved. The loudest eruption of praise came when Jake kissed first Ana, then Babydaddy on the lips.
When they got back to the bus that evening, Babydaddy turned to Jake. "That was rather risky, don't you think?" he said.
"Hey guys, Ana, Paddy, JJ and I are gonna go grab some drinks!" Del shouted into the bus. "Yo9u guys want to come along?"
"No thanks," Jake said. "I think we're gonna turn in early tonight."
They waited until their friends' voices faded. Jake started getting out of his newest pair of dark blue overalls. "Besides," he said. "I kissed Ana too. Stop being such a nelly!"
Babydaddy couldn't stop staring at Jake's ass. Those new overalls accented it better than anyone could have dreamed or hoped for. Upon hearing Jake call him nelly, however, his train of thought shifted abruptly.
"I'll show you who's nelly!" he shouted, pinning JAke to one of the bottom beds in the bus. "You may take charge on stage but you are the biggest bottom I've ever met."
Jake stared into his eyes, a playful, mischievous, flirtatious smile on his lips. "Oh yeah? What a fine bottom I have--I mean, I am--too."
Babydaddy could no longer resist that charm or those piercing blue eyes. He put his mouth over that wry smile and lick Jake's lips, slowly sliding his tongue over and under Jake's. He took in a deep breath of air through his nose while he traced tastebuds and felt the velvet smoothness of his lover's palate. His lips slid over JAke's getting more wet with every second.
They moved down twards Jake's stubble, feeling the prick of each coarse hair. They vibrated in tune with his lover's adam's apple as he moaned. "Oh God," Jake said. "Don't stop, please don't stop."
Babydaddy traced his way down to Jake's nipples, lightly teasing them with the tip of his tongue, flicking one and then the other to send orgasmic shivers down Jake's spine. His eyes briefly met with Jake's before nibbling at them.
Jake moaned louder and Babydaddy slid his hands down Jake's sides, finding where the curve of the fabric met his hip. "Thank God you never wear underwear on stage," he said. :Makes it easier to take these off and to see your huge boner throb underneath them."
He slid them down to Jakie's knees, then undid his own pants, revealing a gigantic hard-on. Teasingly, he leaned back on top of Jake, kissing him and putting his huge cock just outside Jake's ass.
"Oh, God, just take these pants the rest of the way off and put it in already!" Jake yelled, clearly frustrated.
Babydaddy ripped off Jake's overalls and slid inside him.
"Oh, yeah," Jake moaned. "Oh, that's fucking amazing. It's the best feelin ghte world, to have you inside me."
Babydaddy varied the pace, almost bringing himself and Jake to the brink of orgasm, then slowing back down, so when they did cum, it was even more explosive than usual.
"Oh God, oh Babydaddy, oh, oh, OH!" Jake screamed. "That was so amazing, it's definately up there in one of my top five fucks ever!"
"One of your top five fucks ever, or one of our top five fucks ever?" asked BD.
"One of the top five fucks ever," responded Jake, licking Babydaddy's lips. "Now, let's clean up or they'll suspect what's going on between you and me."
"The public suspects, anyway, since you wrote about a boyfriend in a little update."
"For all they know, I met him at a show," responded Jake.
"I've read what they think, and they think it's me," Babydaddy said.
Current Mood: pleased
Hot! Your details are fucking steamy. I love it; definitely keep going.
(P.S. I don't mean this in a bad way, but if you want a beta to proofread your next chapter, I would be more than happy to do it.)
Thanks! I know there's typos in it (I typed it without checking it, I just went from paper to computer post), but I'd love to have a beta check over the next chapter.
Glad you like :D. Chapter 2 should be around shortly.
Awesome! I should definitely be able to do beta duties in, max, one day. I hope that's okay.
Feel free to email me at firstname.lastname@example.org
Okay, again, thank you. Chapter two is still a work in progress (as in, it's still floating around in my head just now), so it'll be a while, but thank you :).
good writing ritchie, i bet you got your self off when you wrote that.
YOu love that shit!!! :)
huge boner sounded a bit out of place in the story, why not say
"see your Shear's tower throbbing underneath" or "aching club of gristle!"